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No. 17 - Mind Games by ~RMRippers:iconRMRippers:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I think of my thought, my feelings
And all of the things I've said
Was it just you in my head?

I think of my unnerving loyalty
The things I said I'd do
Thought from me or from you?

I promised to you
My eternal presence
Or just your influence?

I want to help you
With dogged determination
Or your manipulation?

You ploughed the field
You planted the seed
Manufactured my love
Manufactured my need

But I ignore these bleak whispers
And defend from dark power
You planted the seed
But I nurtured the flower
©2007-2009 ~RMRippers
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Author's Comments

hrm makes you wonder when someone says they can influence and manipulate peoples thought whether your feeling for them are yours or not...

and if you are reading this... (you know who you are)

you cant have a go at me because you have no idea how much it hurts when i ask
"are my thoughts and feelings for you my own or did you just put them in my head?"
and you cant say they are mine... instead you say
"I dont kow"

and yet im still here for you

its a funny old world


you're luckier than you realise

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~OtakuSharkz Jan 23, 2007, 1:30:45 PM
Kill them!! Woooooooooo death

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Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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~BlackDaemon15 Jul 11, 2007, 12:14:31 PM
Another cool poem matti! xxx

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Jump for teh Joy
And Toast your Pants <3
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~RMRippers Jul 11, 2007, 12:49:51 PM
woop

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
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~matt-taylor21 Aug 8, 2007, 3:16:09 PM
interesting concept. are our thoughts real or imagined. now; you got me thinking. thank you; well done=D

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you have value; you are important; choose to be the best you; you can be (just a thought)=D
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~RMRippers Aug 10, 2007, 11:59:01 PM
hooray! this little train got me quite depressed for some time

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
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~matt-taylor21 Aug 11, 2007, 5:47:15 AM
i can imagine. i have thought about it for 2 days. here is what i come up with...every thought we create is a real thought at the time we create it...even; if , we are creating a fantasy. it is possible to love and hate the same person at the same moment. it is the feelings we apply to the thought; which, change; not the thought itself. i hope this helps.=D

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you have value; you are important; choose to be the best you; you can be (just a thought)=D
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~RMRippers Aug 11, 2007, 9:59:01 AM
lol it was worse for me cos a guy who seems to have some degree of mental manipulation couldn't remember if he had manipulated me or not

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
:iconmatt-taylor21:
~matt-taylor21 Aug 11, 2007, 3:43:01 PM
how could he remember; if ,he is a manipulator. to him it would all be in a days work. plus a manipulator is never going to admit he is a manipulator. =D

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you have value; you are important; choose to be the best you; you can be (just a thought)=D
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~RMRippers Aug 12, 2007, 1:41:52 AM
aha but see it was in a time we were trying to get him to stop. and he told other people. but he couldnt remember to tell me

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
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